My expectations for writing 2
In this semester, I
study writing 2 with Mrs. Lina and Mr.Ansyar. I have never studied with them
before. I do not know how the way of their teaching, but I am sure that they
can help me to learn about writing. As a student, I have many expectations for
my study. For writing 2, I hope I can develop my skills in writing, the
lecturers can teach clearly and help me to learn writing, and I can get an
excellent mark.
The first
expectation is about my skill in writing. I hope I can develop my skill in
writing and much better than writing 1. I know my weakness in writing is to
develop my idea and find the right words, so I hope by studying writing 2, I
can write a paragraph or an essay like water flowing. Beside that, I hope I
enable to write the paragraph coherence with the next paragraph in essay. Then
I hope I can use the conjunction in exactly place. To conclude all of that, I
hope I can write an essay more interesting, so many people want to read my
writing.
Then the lecturers
can teach clearly is the next expectation in writing 2. I hope the lecturers
can explain the theories of writing clearly, so I can understand and practice
writing as often as possible. Not only the theories, but the lecturers can help
me to learn how to write a good essay and give me some tips to make it easier.
Then I really hope that they are not stingy to give comments and score for my
writing. Because the lecturers are very important in studying, I hope they want
to consider my desires.
The last expectation
is I can get an excellent mark for writing. Eventhough a score is not very
important for developing my writing skills, it can be a standar how good my
skills are. Because I had a bad experience in last final examination, I hope it
will never happen anymore and I should be careful.
To get an excellent mark is not as easy as I think, so I hope I will be dilligent to practice
writing as often as I can.
In
summary, I have many expectations for writing 2, but all of that will not be
achieved without my afford to practice and check my writing to the lecturers
and friends. All of aspects are needed to get my goals, including practice my
skills, the lecturers and friends.
i hope it become true.....
BalasHapusKeep fighting Peni...
BalasHapusI'm sure you can get it.. :)
Keep on fire Peni rank ancak.. :D
we have the same weakness, Pen..
BalasHapusI hope we can continue our study to next writing..
fighting :)
thank's for your comment A'i..
HapusKomentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
BalasHapusI hope it becomes real Peni..
BalasHapusthank you for your comment Elza.
HapusI hope so.
I hope you can get all your hopes Peni.
BalasHapusthank you for your comment rida.
Hapuswell Peni, you have some serious problem with synonym, in writing you should not use the same word again and again, in this essay you have used the word "hope" for 10 times., so in order to produce not boring essay you should replace the word "hope" by its synonym. it could be: wish, expect, desire,ambition and so on.
BalasHapusyes, that's right. Thank you for your suggestions bg andrezzz.
Hapus